Friday, March 04, 2005

Snippet

A friend of mine feels I should be posting snippets of my writing projects on this blogsite. While that was not my original intent, I have a tendency to humor him. Beware though, text entries, such as the one below, will be excerpts from rough drafts and may or may not appear in the final copy. The work will, more often than not, emit an undefinable odor that will cause your nose to curl up in a desperate attempt to imitate a pigs snout. (Ok, pigs are cute, but you get the idea.)

Excerpt from Book 1.


They floated up, wisps of mist from the rain soaked ground. The essences of a long forgotten and hurriedly forged graveyard, they were the victims of plague and worse. Their never marked gravesites long ago forsaken by family, if indeed any remained. Entire bloodlines had vanished into the spongy, unblessed soil, taken root and grown a crop of desperate need.

Not a prayer had ever passed lips above their charred bones.

Awake, for now, beneath the moonless sky, they wasted no time as they wove their way between the trees and thick undergrowth, through the darkness of the forest to the paler black of the unlit dirt and gravel roads with their muddy puddles and water logged truck tracks.

Their homes were here, they sought them out. Every house preserved, their shells unchanged. Each building taken over by families who claimed to be descendants of the original settlers, but were in truth second families with no real claim to the land. They held no kinship to those who had come before and watched now, unseen, from the cold side of the windowpane.

It was the second family possessions that cluttered the rooms, a scattering of first family belongings among them to lend legitimacy. The names of the first families were forgotten, their purpose for settling here a deeply guarded secret that no historian would ever dislodge.

Sadness clouded the hearts of the misty ones as they left the houses, no longer theirs, with their hidden secrets and followed the road to the other end of the village. A ghostly fog, they ringed the edge of the official cemetery.

Sanctified ground, they could not enter. Each gravesite marked, neatly cared for. Each life remembered, even if only artificially.

A roar, unheard by mortal ears, reverberated on the wind and echoed off the trees, its psychic pressure pushing hard against the wisps and pinning them up against the invisible cemetery wall, then releasing them as the wave ebbed and faded. The wisps gathered together as one and flew down the street in a rush of wind, back to their forgotten plots.

The son of the Patron called. They must obey. They were bound to him by long ago ritual that could not be broken.

4 Comments:

Blogger David Forbes said...

Hi! I stumbled onto your blog through the Deipnosophist blog. Would you mind providing some more details of the kinds of things you are writing? Are you published yet? Just curious.

On a completely unrelated question, how do you get your comments to display beneath the questions? What setting are you using? I'm new to blogging but seem to only get the comment appearing in a completely new browser tab or as a popup.

6:29 PM  
Blogger zara elis said...

Hi to you too. David G. is a good, and interesting friend. He pointed out your blogsite to me as well. I admit I have only lurked there a bit and really haven't had much chance to take an in depth look.

I write fantasy. I have 4 novels in process at the moment, though I am mainly working on a psychic/paranormal right now.

Yes, I am published. A few book reviews, a couple of technical papers, and a short story currently out of print in the US. I am a member of SFWA and I was recently invited to join a professional writing group, the members of which are both impressive and intimidating--that is to say that their collective talent is intimidating to me. But it's been nearly 6 months and they haven't kicked me out yet, so I must be doing something right.

How to fix your blogsite? I'm not totally certain. I'd have to sit down and take a look at my template code to see if I can answer your question. Unfortunately, I am currently at work and cannot view the code here.

I understand you recently sold a novel.

2:08 PM  
Blogger zara elis said...

Ok David--you just need to change a setting.

Go to your Settings tab in blogger. Select the Comments heading. Change the selection under "Show comments in a popup window" to NO.

Then Save your settings and Republish your blog.

It should work fine.

Hope this helps.

7:07 PM  
Blogger David Forbes said...

Hi again. I had that pop-up setting set to NO originally, but when I checked them it took me to a different menu-type page for the comment writer (it was David Gordon) rather than the original post followed by the comments. I've noticed that this blog software can be kind of whonky, so it may have just been a temporary glitch. I'll try it again and see what happens.

Yes, I recently signed a three-book deal with HarperCollins. The whole point of my blog is to chronicle the pre-publication process for anyone who's interested, since this is all new to me as well. I plan on joining the SFWA as soon as I get the contract from my agent. My books are "epic" fantasies, but I also just sent my agent a revision for a young adult contemporary fantasy about a teenager caught in a war between factions of angels, and I have some other contemporary fantasies outlined (though I won't get to write them for a few years at least).

Anyway, I have your site bookmarked and I check in now and then. Sorry for the long delay in replying, I'd actually forgotten about my comment and only recently checked back.

6:42 PM  

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